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Hello again, Moriah! As per your request - Veronica - To be honest, I don't get a great sense of her personality. I know pretty much what I knew before, ...

The Cure...and Dropkick Murphys? My friend, I think your life is complete. 9/10 (because I'm not a fan of Laura Marling) 1. Get Me Away From Here, I'm Dying; Belle ...

Hey Lord Anzius! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this, but I'm here now, so I'll get on it asap. I have to say, I had no ...

Hey Kikuyo! Welcome to the site! Okay. I'm about to throw a bunch of rules, suggestions, and general facts at you, and I don't want you to be unprepared. Take ...

Hi Matthemus! Welcome to YWS! I see this is your first post, so you might want to check out our rules. One of them is to have 2 works reviewed ...

The Mitten Characters: KITTEN, the tiniest kitten BUNNY and MOUSE, Kitten's BFFs FOX, a confused and in love fox ROX, Fox’s girlfriend ACT ONE All is quiet in Ubergaladalaba. Enter ...

Hey Jesse! Just to warn you, I might have a lot of wording suggestions for you, which in no way means your story isn't good. Actually, what it means is ...

It doesn't usually bother me as long as the colors are readable. But every color - at least, every color that I've seen here - are going to be unreadable ...

Hey erratik_statik! Welcome to YWS! Memory sweet memory Comma after the first memory , no? Deep breaths, skipped beats and electric thrills I could be reading this differently, but I ...

Mmm, I like it. Takes us right into the story and into the mind of what must be a very straightforward character (am I right?). Also interesting, since I haven't ...

So, the first bit of my new project starts out with the MC being completely drunk. Like, he's just spent the night downing tequila. But seeing as I've yet to ...

Hiyas! Vyper mentioned the important stuff, but I'll just add my two cents. I mean ten cents. Rating works is good! You should always rate your works, because then they'll ...

That's why the question is, is killing an embryo the same thing as killing a human? Which leads to "is an embryo a human?" IMO, no. Without organs, feelings, thoughts, ...

Ah ha! My love! Galerious! you know I love you right? I'm in need pure fanastic agony, dieing for your points! *faints, hoping Galerious will give her the points to ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Um, also, I'm lazy and not reading the above reviews, so forgive me if I repeat anything. The blood ...