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Re: Hi I'm new
Hey, welcome to the site! You didn't tell us very much about yourself - what do you like to write, poetry, fiction? What kind? Who are your favorite authors? Books? ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Over 1000 posts in 24-hours!
23!!!
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Hi
Hey! About never finishing a story, I have the same problem, and what I do is jot every idea down in a notebook when it comes to me. Then I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Bedside Reminder
Hey lilymoore! Here (finally) for the review (sorry about that)! So, I found little wrong with this piece. Yes, it was a little confusing, but I think it works to ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: S.P. 0.1
That was about to change, I decided "They" not catching the narrator was about to change? That sounds awfully weird. I knew that my and the others attempts at Should ...
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Scotland? Yeah? Anyway, just to get this thread back on track: [spoiler] [/spoiler] Here's looking at ya, kid.
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: I'll have a review extra value meal,
Galerius, lilymoore, asxz, and MySunshine - I'll get to them this weekend. I promise.
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Stained
This is amazing. You are amazing. Brilliant. Lovely. Two lines that have too many syllables, though: through [s]such[/s] foul straits, through heartbreak's stain the silence [s]comes,[/s] wraps o'er m
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Onmitsu - Chapter II
Hello again! Nakayama-kun had tried to do this to me once. “What do you want, Jin?” m y father asked , as I was speechless. “Well?” “What do you think ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: The Song Thing.
2-There's people talking They talk about me Wake Up by Hilary Duff?
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: The Song Thing.
I'll have a go! Demeter: number 16 is The Old Gumbie Cat by Andrew Lloyd Webber (love that musical!) Niteowl: 1 = All At Once by the Fray 17 = ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Stuck on my social story
America the police read the arrestee their Miranda Rights, which will be something like: "You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say can and will be used against ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Excessive Drinking?
Thanks so much guys! The info and the thread are extremely helpful.
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Eruption
Hey! This is great, but you're right, it does need some help punctuating. The first thing I'm going to do is give you two articles: one two and hopefully those ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Thin Ice
Hi! With the wave of your hand you say I think you should use a instead of the in this line - it's a tiny thing, but it does make ...
Feb 23, 2009
