Marionette

Thank you all for the reviews and helpful critiques~ You all made me one very happy gal reading them. I'll be sure to take your advice into mind for future ...

Excellent poem. I loved the imagery and word choice, my favorite being "the shipwreck of my liberty". Keep up the good work~

I really liked the sound of this poem. There was something almost lyrical about it, as if I could imagine a voice whispering or singing it. The word choice was ...