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Re: Beer Stains
Thank you all for the reviews and helpful critiques~ You all made me one very happy gal reading them. I'll be sure to take your advice into mind for future ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Beer Stains
Author's Note : This is a submission to Azila's POV contest going on right now, and it's also my first submission to the community. It's from the viewpoint of a ...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Harper Lee's To Kill A Mockingbird
Ah, yes. To Kill a Mockingbird. It is quite possibly one of the best literary achievements of all time. There's just something about it that endears so dearly to the ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: My Knight in Epitome Armor
What words can be be used to describe this? Let's start with beautiful, followed immediately by wonderful. The imagery is just stunning, using just enough to create a perfect image ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Writing Requirements
Music is always a must, even if it flows from the kitchen. (Which is happening right now, from my sister's laptop.) Normally I have to construct specific playlists just because ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Enchanting Voice
Quite the lovely poem. I particularly love the rhyme scheme that's handled quite well, since many poets will just find random words for the sake of a rhyme but yours ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Gorgon
This poem has its own voice that I like and a certain interesting feel that you don't read nowadays, but with that said... It also didn't make much sense to ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
Writer's block should definately be food for grizzly bears. Most of the time. Because, as much as the feeling kills me and makes me realize why it is so many ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Dead Angel (critique me!! <3)
I expected a little bit more from this poem, but it left me feeling the same as when I started reading it. The concept of it is lovely, the image ...
Jan 10, 2008 -
Re: Another one? Oh my~
Thank you for that.
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Another one? Oh my~
And hola to you~ I hope to the do same as well.
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Footnotes
Excellent poem. I loved the imagery and word choice, my favorite being "the shipwreck of my liberty". Keep up the good work~
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Blood Kiss
I really liked the sound of this poem. There was something almost lyrical about it, as if I could imagine a voice whispering or singing it. The word choice was ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Blood Kiss
I really liked the sound of this poem. There was something almost lyrical about it, as if I could imagine a voice whispering or singing it. The word choice was ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Another one? Oh my~
Thank you all for the such a warm welcome! I would have gotten to a reply sooner, but my chemistry exam had almost eaten me alive. (I swear I will ...
Jan 9, 2008
