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Re: The Amulet In The Forest (2 of 2)
That was brilliant! A magnificant ending! I love the part where the say that the amulets are the only things keeping them alive. It is full of action, has an ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: letting go
That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Half-Breed's Eyes (1)
THat is soooo sad! You are a brilliant writer but the part of the child's escape is sort of confusing and you may need to try and make it more ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: A Bike Ride
It's sorta ok but you need to make it rhyme more ore else it won't make sense.
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Role Play Notices
I have made ANOTHER Role Play called "Deltora Quest RP"! PLEASE JOIN!
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Who am I Meant to Be
THat is becaus eit is meant to be confusing and it implies the imression of being lost.
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Inner Beauty
OMG! That is bloody brilliant! Please write more on this story! I think you have a gift in writing!
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
Oh and thumbs up for a job well done!
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Iron Bars
That was bloody brilliant! It completly captures the image of someone that is lost in love with the wrong person but can't see that for themself! I belive that you ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Role Play Notices
I have made another RP called "St Trinian RP". JOIN OR DIE! JOKES! :twisted:
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: I lost my best friend today.
Is this all true? It felt as though it was real! WRITE MORE! Please.
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: My Coven - Chapter One
That was rather interesting but it needs more action and adventure. It is ok but rather confusing as well.
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Chapter 1 part 1
OHMIGWD! That was fuggin' awsome! I can't believe that the king attacked his own son! AND disowned him! That was bloody brilliant! Please write more!
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Role Play Notices
Hey! I'm Maria Rowlands and I have made a Role Play for the ABC3 show, "The Killian Curse". Please join in and let the Horror begin! (Jokes, there is no ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: The Crimson Ribbon [1]
WOW! That...was...AWSOME! Please write more of this! I absolutly LOVE it! It has action, drama, mystery and VAMPIRES! All the essential needs for a perfect story in my eyes! I ...
Nov 7, 2011