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Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P --part2
AHHHHHH! THAT WAS SOOOO TOTALLY AWSOME! BFF FIGHT! HAMBURGER HORCROXES!!! OMG THAT WAS AWSOME!
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: The Will of a Deer in Headlights
OH MY GAWD! That was the most heart moving story that I have read! You have a lot of talent and I hop that one day one of your stories ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: Wishbone
That was extreamly short so I can't say much but it was rather good. I belive that you should make your short stories a bit longer otherwise there would be ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P
That was really good! I believe that you may have messed a few things around. But otherwise a brilliant story.
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Our Stop
That was...There are no words to describe how sad that is. This is the saddest poem that I have ever read and it came close to making me cry. The ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Old Friends
I have to say that that was extremly sad. I think that you are very talented. I was suprised when you said that it was your first poem so I ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Mathew_Beta.exe (2 of 2)
Oh my goodness! That is so sad! I felt as though I would cry! AND it was in the middle of PD/H/PE! Please write more!
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Mathew_Beta.exe (1 of 2)
That was very, very, VERY good! I believe that you have potential to become a short story author.
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Freeing A Caged Bird (A Naruto Fan-Fic)- Chapter Two
O_O'! That was better than the last chapter!
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Freeing A Caged Bird (A Naruto Fan-Fic)- Chapter One
O_O'! KEI! THAT WAS AWSOME! how many Naruto episodes have you seen? I have seen all of them.
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Prologue
That was very interesting. I believe that you could add two things, those are the descriptions for the young girl and the serpent. You have done very well in writing ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One: Rewrite
O_O' WOW is all that I can say.
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Infractus Iudicium: Part Two
How do you do that with stories?! You are extremly good at writing stories such as this one!
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Painted Marionette
That is brilliant! I belive that you have alot of potential for writing. I love the part where the flaming wolf appears to save the girl from the reapers.
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Infractus Iudicium: Part One
That is a brilliant story and I hope that you go far with talent such as that. I may be in my teens but I know when others have a ...
Nov 8, 2011