MariaCee

Very, very good, especially for being only fourteen and self-taught. The detail is excellent as well as the structure and anatomy, though I'm a tiny tiny bit iffy on some ...

Ah, okay okay. I deleted the preface; I didn't know. D: Sorry. Well, I don't know. Maybe I made it too confusing to understand...I do that a lot. xD But ...

You don’t know how the sun sets, You degrade and break your catch beyond dusk, ‘Till you’ve gotten your approval, Enduring your pleasure as you rest; Letting her trudge in ...

Rhyming has, and probably never really will, be my sort of thing; I can see from where you're coming from. Thanks for the suggestions/help. =)

He blazes his flames with utter joy, His bewildered mate can’t help but stare. Pride filling himself; he acts much too coy, Keeping her well aware. The golden seal of ...

Thanks. ^^ Actually, I posted some poetry last night that needs some comments. :0;

So, this is a totally freewritten poem that was done blamefully (word?) from boredom and mood. It was done, err, a few months ago I think. I consider it pretty ...

I also consider is cliche, but it's pretty good nonetheless. You're aware of the feeling, which is a key point. Overall, pretty good. Keep it up.

Hah, I like it. :D Creepy, though funny. Very random.

Yes, yes. Also, in poetry, abstract and use of metaphors is more accepted. I like mixing things and defying the logic.

My name is Maria. I'm young; I write for pleasure for my own sake. I like chick lit because girly stuff is cute. But yeah, I write mainly poems and ...