MapleCFreter

the only things Americans have ever told me I say differently is washroom instead of bathroom... :P I can't help it :(

This is very good :) I've only read the first chapter and I don't yet know what kind of creature these characters are. Don't get me wrong, that's a good ...

@Snoink: I don't know anyone that actually says eh :P and I don't think anyone I know says pardon either :D @MiRaCLeS: I'm writing a novel :) it's 35k right ...

before I get into the talking I just want to get some editing out of the way. I was a much more adept witch, and she didn't like that. This ...

thanks for all your help :D I'm already starting to get the hang of this :)

Amazing, just like the last three..... I'm really starting to get into this story. I can't wait for something to happen, other than her just walking around the white room. ...

Wow, this is great, just like the first chapter. When the flashback started I was sure she was going to be kidnapped, but then she escaped... weird. I guess that'll ...

I really liked this :) Even though this is short and I don't really know what it's going to be about yet, I can tell that it is my type ...

Chapter 3: Kill or be killed Drew exited the room in the nick of time, because the dark skinned woman was back. She looked even more sullen than before, if ...

Hey, I really liked this! :) I don't know if you are going to turn this into anything more, but this would be a good start for a novel. I ...

I really liked the idea of this and some parts of it actually brought tears to my eyes. However, if this is going to be a novel, then you need ...

Chapter 2: Drew “Wha-what?” I asked, my voice shaking. I just couldn't process it. It was like I had a mental block preventing me from making the connection between the ...

Chapter 1: Marked I drummed my fingers against my desk, my fingernails making tiny indents in the soft wood. The digital clock on my bedside table read 6:15, fifteen minutes ...

Hey, I've been on the site Inkpop for a while and I've heard that this is the only other good writing site. However, I don't know exactly how this site ...