Manny

Sounds like a conspiracy book about the Masons. Maybe they're being exterminated by another group? Atomic Architects

:shock: No offense, but you look kind of like Tom Cruise...

I revised Fight or Flight with some more character emotion and thought. Do you like it more?

He's up 300ft in the air. The mile is how far he went geologically, like a car.

Adam sat in the back of English class listening to Mr. Reynolds go on and on about the wonders of reading. His arms were crossed over the desk, his head ...

This chapter was okay, but I didn't like it as much as the others. It might have been because you switched view point. Also, it seemed like you described everything ...

I really liked this a lot. If I didn't know Payton was a werewolf before I read it then I would now. Good job, keep it up.

After I'm finished cutting down a tree, I'm going to post the alternate version of this prologue that I talked about earlier. It's from the father's point of view and ...

If it weren't for the flame pluming from Martin's right hand, he would swear that time was frozen like the earth beneath his feet. Lousy coke and candy + all ...

I stayed up all night just writing and listening to music. Got 8,317 words now! :D

I've written another version of this prologue from the dad's point of view that is a lot better. I'll exchange them or something today. I've also got Chapter One, Chapter ...

I think this is the best work of your's that I've read so far. Other than some typos, there wasn't anything I noticed wrong with it. I really liked how ...

Thanks for the comments, it makes me feel good. I didn't really want the prologue to be too long. Anyways, I should probably work on Chapter One soon. Watch out ...

I have it linked in my signature. What's this NaNo profile thing you're talking about?

“Daddy, why do you have to go?” The child used his gloved hand to wipe his runny nose. Frosty air brushed against him, leaving specks of snow on his winter ...