Manny

Let's wait for a few more people to join, then we can start this thing off.

Yeah, you can make more than one character Rubric, but make sure you tell us which character you're writing for at the beginning of each post. Ayumi, just like kitty ...

I'm not that great at detailed, line-by-line critiquing, but I can comment on the actual story. I liked the way Chapter One played out, but like Kylan said, you need ...

This is the place for talking about plots for each individual character and the story as a whole. It'd be nice to have some Company members, both with and without ...

Setting: This Storybook will take place all over the globe in the early part of 2008. Plot: Ordinary people all around the world are discovering that they are Extraordinary, but ...

An old, black women from sometime in the past. Probably a mother of a lot of kids. Adam Speckle

Name: Mike Age: 17 Gender: Male Education: According to the United States public school systems: half-way through Senior year. Of course, I know a little bit about everything and absolutely ...

F: Foreshadow

I don't mind prologues as long as they're interesting enough to pull me into the main story. I mostly see them in stories that focus on one character, but introduce ...

C: Climax

I take it as something about a girl who's telling about her life before some major event changed it. I might pick it up depending on what it says on ...

Notice the three moles that make a triangle on my forehead? I realized the other day that I have 6 different spots with that triangle pattern. It's freaky... Arn't I ...

9/10 You'd be the last thing anyone saw coming, attack of the penguins!

8/10 It's cool.

JabberHut & bigbadbear