Manny

The mushroom photo is amazing. The way the orange contrasts the brown wood and the greenery in the background is sweet. Hopefully there will be more photos to come. :)

Wow. That was amazing. I could definitely see that in published work. Aside from some minor hitches, it was great. The fairy stops her chatter and her hands fall to ...

Overall, the piece was good. At first the Doctor isn't allowed in, but once the man hears him say Sarah, he lets him in. He says: "Please come in Doctor." ...

10/10 Cause it's a girl!

Those pictures are beautiful. My favorites are the Mustard Field and Stairway to Nature. I have an affinity for vines attached to stones. The more I see pictures from other ...

I, personally, liked 1, 6, and 7 the most out of all of them. The first one is really cool with the way the ray of light crosses in front ...

It's a very touching piece, arch angel. The only thing I'd suggest is: I am and always will be with you It might flow better if you replace am with ...

This is one of those songs that when you read it you can actually hear the song playing in your head. I really liked the time progression, like Pawprint said. ...

Adam Adam sat on a deep-cushioned leather couch and looked at his psychiatrist. He didn't like talking with her because it always felt like she wasn't really paying attention to ...

That's okay. I was just kind of freaked out.

This maybe a coincidence, but it seems my character is your father. Why?

0_0 That was an awesome critique, Penguin! Thanks so much! I've taken your advice and tweaked some of the problems. *works on chapter two*

I think we have enough for everyone to start. Others are still welcome to join. I'll post mine tomorrow morning as I'm almost about to pass out at the moment. ...

I've changed it slightly, taking some stuff out and adding more. I also reveal a little bit about the other main character, who is still to come. Enjoy and thanks ...

Chapter One Elliot Sanders flopped down on a regal white couch while vigorously pushing the buttons of a joystick. His formal tie and expensive suit looked out of place compared ...