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Manielski2000

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Lost and Faded

    First of all I'd like to say that I love the first part of the story. You captured the tone really well and invited me into the mind of the ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Planet of the Electric Moon Part 1

    First of all I'd just like to say that I love your use of snake imagery in this chapter. It fits really well with the tone of the setting and ...

    Oct 24, 2016


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings