Mandorelute

I am impressed. Thank you for hearing me out without getting defensive. I really believe that you have a lot of talent. I don't know which poet or poem you ...

Hey there, I'm Mandorelute, and I feel honored to critique your first poem submitted here on yys. Just so you know, constructive criticism is sincerely my goal, but I am ...

Hey there. I see that you have a couple of poems in this style submitted recently. I've been absent from YWS for a while and I haven't yet scoped your ...

Hullo there. Here goes: This website is about giving constructive criticism, so that's what I'm going to be doing; but I am going to do so, while being honest about ...

I need you closely, closer, more. This is the awaking of gIrl; gingerly un-not by knot, my insides still turn nimble at thought's taste of you. If I were a ...

Oh wow! This is a terrific poem, luv. I don't say this often, but I loved it. It read clean, made sense, filled in the blanks, but left questions. It ...

Hey there, love. Okay, here we go. First of all, I thought your poem was very nice. I feel that it would have been better to see something like this ...

Hullo there. I liked this poem a terrible lot. For some reason, and oddly enough I believe that it was the serene and surreal ambiance of your affection for this ...

Hey there, First Impression: I liked your poem. Anything I write is of the intent to be helpful. First of all, I thought this was a great example of the ...

Hello, First. Wow. I instantly fell in love with your style. You really capture the halfway house between my two favorite places in the wonderland of poetry. There is the ...

Hey there. Wow. This poem threw me for a loop. I found all these powerful phrases that communicated complete and deeply philosophical concepts, and I myself write a lot of ...

Hello, I feel very sensitive about critiquing this poem, because while I was reading it I searched for its message, its heart, its core, I found clips and pieces from ...

This is almost 6 years old, and Iwant to rewrite it and make it more than a piece of crap but I would like it torn up in the critique ...

I thought your poem interesting. I had a hard time reading the blue font, but once I started - I understood. It took me there. Well done.

I hope this does not offend, but I thought this pieces was adorable - as in, cute. Splendidly creepy, almost as if the creature was saying- you'll be hunted next, ...