Mandorelute

Hello Kamas, Okay, so I have not read your original poem as of yet, so I may be missing some of the background required to give you the specific type ...

Time wrinkles into the clutches of this memory. A permanent affixation caresses me down, drowning my cerebellum in aching ecstasy; no culture or class can capture the dreams escaping my ...

Hey there, KrimZen. I have to admit that first of all I was a total sucker for reading your poem just because of its title: "Elegy for Lost Boys - ...

Oh wow. Hello there, darling. I read this very slowly and carefully. You don't do poetry often? Or you don't share it with others often? I must admit I kind ...

Hello there, Glimmerglass. While this poem certainly had an efflorescence of whimsy, I wouldn't say that you wrote a nonsensical poem. Over all, I thought it was a lovely and ...

Hi there. New member? Welcome to yws, I am glad that you're here. I hope you find yourself at home. Remember to try to write at least three critiques or ...

Hello there, Wow. This poem really surprised me, because when I read the title I thought to myself that this could either be a fascinating piece, or one glance would ...

Alright, Mandorelute, she's a young woman, and you're REALLY going to give her that huge of a critique? Seriously? Calm down. Not everybody can be writing geniuses like you. I ...

Hey luv, how are you doing? I loved your series of poems here. My little sister is also a member here on yws, although I don't believe she's very active ...

Hey there darling, how're you doing? Is this a poem about how you personally feel? If you need someone to talk to, you can pm me any time. You don't ...

Hey there darling, welcome to yws. Do you like it so far? Remember to always critique at least half as much as you submit. Make reading and trying to share ...

all the words I want to say fall down the back of my throat slipping like little black pearls to lay like hungry stones within my bowels; when my tongue ...

Hey there! Her we go. First off, 'elusive boy-man'? Haha. I was like, this has to be a home schooler or a youth group kid, and then: '...I’m glad you’re ...

Hey there, luv. Great job! First Impression: Oh! What a perfectly romantic poem! Like a lovely tragic little picture I fell into, for a minute experiencing the beauty and then ...

Hullo there, street rat. Cute sn. Alright, on to the critique, here we go. First Impression: Okay. The first thing I am going to point out, I wanted to tell ...