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I do realize that I made some significant historical errors - I didn't realize these at the time because I didn't have Internet access and to be completely honest, I ...

See, this wasn't a bad poem because there was some emotion behind it - the thing is that I think you used two things you shouldn't have done together. You ...

Nice poem, easy to relate to, good use of punctuation, grammar, all that stuff - the only thing that bugged me was there was no image. I don't necessarily mean ...

First things first - you cannot use capitalization and have good grammar without punctuation. I know I do this a lot as well, and I apologize for being hypocritical, but ...

This was.. tragically impressive. In a good way of course. Brilliant work.

Thank you all for the reviews, I really appreciated every comment and criticism. I actually wrote this as an English assignment and did it in about forty minutes, so it's ...

There's no need to apologize - your review was great and it honestly did help. Welcome back, btw, and thanks for taking the time to look at my work. I ...

Let's just say this was an English assignment gone rogue. Enjoy. Marie Franklin. Kevin McGrown. Halle Severnisa. Dmitry Hanuszenko. Lucas Ramstone. Caroline Fontaine. Joseph Fontaine. These are the na

Thank you very much for the review - I appreciate every word.

This is a work I wrote when my Grandmother died of Alzheimer's disease. It was placed in an envelope and put into the coffin next to her. I hope you ...

I know this one is far from fantastic, but it's been like a skeleton in my cupboard ever since I wrote it and I seriously need some help with it. ...

Personally I think I just have a weakness for your poems, but I thought this was quite brilliant. No little nitpicks that are worth pointing out to you, and even ...

I honestly don't understand why people think that not using capital letters is going to make their poem more personal, or emotional - this was good and sent across a ...

That's quite good. A little lacking in detailed perhaps, but overall very nice and very beautiful and artistic use of colouring and media.

Beautiful photographs, but they look too plastic on the covers. The writing, the background and the design should all merge together seamlessly, otherwise it ends up looking like either a ...