MamaLama95

Now to be perfectly honest I didn’t have the slightest clue of how to react to you. How you explained so carefully, All the most important things that we had ...

Normally I'd probably attack you for lack of proper punctuation or grammar or something, but this is perfect just the way it is I think. Very short and sweet - ...

I think you should make it more clear what happened. I understand you want to make it mysterious, but mysterious and confusing are two different things. Be more clear about ...

Unfortunately I have to agree with the aforementioned comments. Really cliche, bad attempts at being romantic and in pain at the same time - you could do something with the ...

He stared after her. There was something not quite right about the way she walked, or the way she held herself. Too rigid. Too straight and proud. “Come on then!” ...