Maki-Chan

*Time for ACTION ^_^* Shiro- He was so confused. nothing made sense anymore. THen he felt pain. A gunshot was heard. SHiro fell to the ground. Someone had shot him ...

Tobi- Everyone looked. Jared and Amber entered the room. They carried food (Whatever Jessica eats?). Jared sighed. "I knew that going out to get Jessica something to eat was smart. ...

Shiro- Surounded by these girls. WHo ever they were. *Still doesn't know they are vapmires.* Shiro felt very strange. They talked of blood. What were they vampires?

Shiro- His eyes widened. To this person- his blood was like delisious treat. A fine well aged wine. Grace grabbed her, and shook her head. "Shiro you should head home." ...

Name- Kyo age- 19 personality- the silent type. Strong and wise. He is known for betrayl. power- can read minds- and communitcate/ control people and other things. history- he was ...

Shiro- He looked over to see another person come in. Now Grace, Sam and that person were in the room with Shiro.

Tobi- Tobi, he was in pain. But he didn't want Jessica to die. "Eat me," He said. Jessica dn Maria stared at him. WAs he crazy! "If you die I'll ...

Tobi- He wanted to sleep, but he forced his eyes open. Tobi was in the arms of Maria and Jessica. BOth of whom, looked releaved to see his eye's open.

Shiro- After a while. SHiro ran to get some lunch. *Sorry its short, I haven't a clue what to write ^_^*

Luppi- After class she headed outside. She needed fresh air. It was what she craved for. Sitting onn a lonely stone bench in the wooded area by the school, Luppi ...

Tobi- Darkness. That was swept across the empty icy plains. He was alone, like always. But something was different there was someone with him- in the darkness. "Tobi." The voice ...

Maki- She looked around into the beautiful room. Zen was sitting on a couch. The others had lost track of Maki. Now it was just Zen and her.

not bad for a prologue. You should search Google for forien names and thier meanings. Here's an exsample- HAimon= bloody (Greek)

space out please, and if it is really- really long then put it into parts. Helps readers not be so scared. ^_^

wow, I really liked this ^_^ Pt. 2 perhaps? If you do have a part 2 I'll be really happy. I'd be really happy if you made this into a ...