Maki-Chan

Tobi Uzaki- He fell to his knees. Tobi couldn't breath. "D-damn it, Jessica." He moaned. What ever was happeing she was in trouble. She needed him. Now he was going ...

*I have the same problem too* Tobi Uzaki- He awoke and it was night. Tobi was awake. Lucinda was still asleep. He carefully got off the bed, and placed her ...

*Its the same for me.*

Shiro- He sighed rubbing his head. It still hurt.

Tobi Uzaki- Lucinda layed on the bed. Tobi lied beside her, his presense comforting her. Time passed and they both fell asleep. Lying besides each other.

Shiro- He shook his head. "I'm fine."

Shiro- Grimmjaw grabbed Gatame and squeezed her throat. Shiro was pissed off now. "LET HER GO!" Shiro roared. THen he transformed into a dragon.( ) Grimmjaw laughed and dropped Gatame. ...

Mimi- She waved to Amu, Naomi and Ijorie. Kai grabbed her, and jumped. The place where she once stood exsploded. Mimi screamed. Kai hld her close, protecting her. SOmething was ...

Tobi Uzaki- He walked to his room. The sun was begining to peak over the horizon. Tobi was tired and needed sleep. He fell onto his bed. At least it ...

oh.... then I can't help you. SOrry :(

*I guess that'll be me." Tobi Uzaki- He left the room. Leaving Jessica alone, his only request to her was. "Jessica, no matter what. All I ask is for you ...

Tobi Uzaki- He grabbed her arm. Stopping her from leaving. "This clan we're apart of is stronger than ever. It's numbers are seemingly endless. The were-cats are small in numbers ...

Shiro- He rubbed his head. The world was clearer now, and more stable. He could now sit still, not trembling. Shiro got out of bed, and walked into the living ...

Mimi- She ran into a store and grabbed a bag. " What are you doing?" Kai asked. His voice was quiet but Mimi heard him. "I'm getting candy of course." ...

This is better. There were a few mistakes, but the written work was a lot better than before. Nice job. "I can't beleive you let that happen!" she heard her ...