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Re: Midnight Stars
I liked this, and even though I pretty much suck at writting poetry!(WHY!!!!!!) I know a good poem from a horrible one. This one was a good poem. It flows ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Plushoriam: Chapter 1 (Revised edition- third time lucky)
Hello ^_^ Alright Here is my review (in a very long time) I couldn't find any grammar, or spelling problems. The only thing I think you need to work on ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: memories of high school..
so.... When do we start?
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: memories of high school..
this is the first time i ahve been in a storyboard in a very long time. Wish me luck ^_^ Name: Raph Williams appearance: Raph is an Japanese and German. ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Chapter 1
Tahnk you ^_^ I will fix up the minor errors. I hope you like chapter 2- it involves a trip to the doctor ^_^
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: memories of high school..
may I join?
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Chapter 1
thanks for, yet another awsome review. i fixed all the sstuff you pointed out, and rewrote the stuff you suggested. Also for "ile" I can't spell, and spell check didn't ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Normal Day A teenage girl sat alone in a booth located in the empty part of the café. She was taking quick, small sips of her coffee, in ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Prologue
To let you know. The last sentece holds a lot of importance in my story.
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Prologue
You really liked it, AWSOME! ^_^ I'll fix up the minorn errors you pointed out. To answer your question I will continue this. i will pm you when Its finished. ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: Heart's Illusion (Working Title) Prologue
Prologue She stood there, frozen- Her long twig legs shaking. No matter how much her mind wanted to step forward, her legs did not obey. The girl shook her small ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: names
Click on the link below for help ^_^
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Saving Me
not bad, not bad at all. You have a lot more talent at writing poetry than I do. I somehow end up making poems that don't flow well. Words that ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Samurai's Disciple- Prologue
Oh! I've heard of MNT:GAIDEN! Its an awsome fancomic. Tigerfog is such an amazing artist. He's going to be famous. Last I checked LEO! He came back! I frikin screamed ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Rate YWS
Ever since I recieved -500 points (Which is LAME!) I don't respect this site anymore.
May 26, 2008
