Maki-Chan

Interesting I will read more, I want to find out somethings, hopefully in the next chapter. 1. who is Caolyn 2. why is she looking for a 'looking glass' 3. ...

First of all, I saw no mistakes of anykind. You always do a good job of your grammar. 2nd I thought this chapter was perfect. It was just the right ...

I have returned. I was in Vvs.W 1 and 2 so I decided when I came back to YWS to join and help my old friend Paramorem, and also the ...

Name: Twili (I know its a wierd name) Age: 16 Element: darkness Personality: he is silent and timid. He prefers to be alone Weapon/Gift: He controls the darkness. Like he ...

So what's happening with the plot? I am Twili ^_^

Alright, Firestar has requested for me to join so I have a few questions. 1. who is who. (Elemtens ect.) 2. what is happening? 3. what is going to happen ...

oh.....ok ^_^

oh.....ok ^_^

Well this drew me in. It was simple yet complex. It foreshadowed perfectly, and now I am interesting. I like the way you made it an old man reading a ...

Is it ok If restart this again? i wouldn't mind getting into this again- using Tobi Uzaki again ^_^

Name: Kizame Utada Age: 16 Gender: male Appearance: He is tall and has white soft skin. His hair is a chin length shaggy emo styled cut, and is black. Personality: ...

From what I have been reading I could say that this could possible become a novel. Its really good. I really like your way of writing. I could really picture ...

Hello and welcome to YWS. I am Maki-chan and I will be doing your review. i have one word to say to you... AWSOME!!!!! This was a really great prologue. ...

I thought it was rather sweet, and so adorable. Myabe if you want you can lengthin this so that we can feel an emotional connection with the characters Gavin and ...

Raph- He looked down the hallway. Tanya was talking with her best friend, Sonia. He didn't like Sonia very much, but he had a HUGE crush on Tanya. He sighed. ...