Maki-Chan

Nicely written, I have been sucked into your story, so you will get more reviews from me ^_^ I saw no grammar, or spelling errors. Hopefully you will do more ...

Lizzy- Class had ended only for her. The porfessor announced. "Ms. McClure, you're wanted at the freshmen Princible's Office." Lizzy gave a slight nod and got up. "See ya later." ...

Cool, this is somewhat strange and interesting. thats a question only god himself can answer me i can't comprehend whats really going on in life My favorite part! All you ...

Lizzy- She felt like she was being watched (Which she was), but atleast she was ni a class she enjoyed. MATH! The numbers, the formulas, the equations, the graphs, everything ...

Lizzy- Lizzy was ready to take Luci's hand, she had made a friend. But Mr. Williams didn't allow it. "Come on you should head to your room." He commanded. Leon ...

Lizzy McClure- It was a normal day, just like all the many others that seemed to pile up in her life. Lizzy McClure got up everyday, got dressed, went to ...

Very interesting, I really enjoyed this. A few errors for spelling, but other than that GOOD JOB ^_^ I like your word use, it really flows togther.

Can someone please bring me in. (Puppy dog face) please. I am Kizame Utada.

Ok Here's what I got so far. 1 human- Lizzy(female 7 vampires- four males three females. I will wait one more day before we begin. To let everyone know the ...

Possible Storyboard plots. 1. Life for 17 years old, Lizzy McClure is average in every single way; however one day she is accepted into a mysterious private school in Transylvania. ...

ummm... This is kinda creepy. I can tell the 'main' character is in first person view, but you should use alittle bit of proper grammar. Also capitalize all of your ...

YES! THis is exsactly how I feel about MATH! Its important but I HATE IT SO MUCH!!!!! >_< Nice word use, and comparing math to such things as a slow ...

Oh, I rather liked this. The word use was good, especially the ending. ^_^ and feel back down to the floor Its fell, now the gates of hell are opened ...

I loved this. It was so incredible cute. I loved the way the words seemed to flow perfectly together. You are really quite a great poet. I found no mistakes ...

Not bad, but it seems a little bit too univentfully. Maybe you can have more fun with words and spice up this chapter a little bit. I liked the way ...