Maki-Chan

(You don't need to quit right now its not very important to know what is happening!) Lizzy- As Leon drunk her blood, Mr. Williams grabbed his head, and pulled him ...

(After this post I am going to bed- its 11:21 pm) Lizzy- She relaxed against the pillow on the infumary bed. Mr. Williams was sitting on a chair outside of ...

Lizzy- She felt so tired and faint. Not only because of what had happened but also because of seeing her own blood. Dr. Doodle came in carrying a chart. "Back ...

(DAMN! Posted at the same time AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can we hold off having Lizzy discover the truth?)

Lizzy- She shook, Mr. Williams had been occupied with the other studenst. He grabbed Lizzy, and wrapped a band-aid on her finger. "Are you alright?" He asked. Lizzy gave a ...

Lizzy- She shook like a leaf, and tried to push Leon away." Get off."

*Arrive into english class- where Lee and Lizzy are. ^_^ Later on Lizzy can have a paper cut and Leon, and others flip out*

(NOTE!!!!!! LIZZY DOESN"T KNOW ABOUT THE VAMPIRES!!!!! SHE THINKS EVERYONE IS HUMAN!!!!!!) Lizzy- She chewed the gum. Lee seemed pretty nice.

Lizzy- She was now in English and a puffy blacking brown haired girl came in late. The teacher had yelled at her, but she took her seat. Lizzy looked over ...

Lizzy- She stared at this student. He surtaily didn't try to obey the dress code, but there was something else about him. Thats when she noticed the blood on her ...

no one else wants to comment prologue or chapter 1?

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Everyone I ahve posted a disccusion ^_^

Ok if anyone needs to talk about anything come here and ask. I will post a list of 'main' characters and 'sub' characters. ^_^ Main! NAME, gender, species, grade/status in ...

Once again good job. I like the way your write your chapters. If only they could be longer. (sigh) Anyways nice job. I didn't exspect that the little girl would ...