Maki-Chan

alone time.* Lizzy- She shook her head. "No its not his fault I followed him." Leon stared at her, what was it about her that he was soo attracted to?

(ULTIMATE CONFUSION) I do not get it. Are they vampire pirates? Also do they turn their crew or posess them?

Lizzy- Against her better judgement she ran after him. Leon was in the boy's dorm building heading to his room. Lizzy didn't understand but she followed her. He could hear ...

*SIC- Leon is very invovled. Especially since he was in Lizzy's wierd dream, which I will describe again soon. It is day 2 (Tuesday) of Lizzy being at this school. ...

I fixed it up. I sometimes do not really pay attention to what I am writting (Which sounds really stupid). Maybe it was because I was being annoyed by both ...

ok, I went over the review and re-edited my prologue. I have somewhat of a problem with repeating words. To let you all know this isn't a dream. Terra is ...

*NOTE! There are bad words, and such.* Chapter 1 I felt so awkward standing there. No one talked to me; all I am is a by-stander. I never do anything, ...

This was really good, no GREAT! I love how twisted it is. Well done. :D

well done. I liked your word use, your phrases seemed to flow together very easily. Nice job ^_^ There'd be words of love, of joy. They'd extend to the end ...

hmm... I have to agree with everyone else. This is a rather good start, and I hope you continue it ^_^...oh you did. (OOPS) Well then I will go check ...

close. no wonder i failed history. (LOL) anyways, if you do write more, or even continue this you should pm me, and I'd be happy to read and review it ...

*SURE!* Lizzy- "LIZZY!" A fimilar voice called out. It was Lucinda, Lizzy looked away. oh no! "What the hell are you doing out of the infermory? You made everyone worried.." ...

thanks ^_^ I am glad you liked it. I will go over it, and fix the stuff you stated. ^_^ Also 'smell the roses' is a rahter popular saying in ...

Lizzy- "Umm.." She mumbled. huh, this is quite strange.... Lizzy felt exstremely uncomfortable. I wonder where Mr. Williams is? It was true she had ditched him at the nurses office. ...

Prologue I stood surrounded by an infinite marsh of mud and muck. I could smell the faint taint of dirt, and salt water. In these marshes, one wrong move and ...