Maki-Chan

I am so bored! if someone tells me what to review I'll do it. First come first serve. I am not very good with reviewing poetry, but I'll do my ...

oh...oops.... VOn- He sat away from everyone else, against the cage bars. He was afraid and didn't understand why Eli did that. Why did she briing him here? "Why did ...

Gracee can you please post this into smaller parts. I don't have a lot of free time, but I want to read this. Can you please, PLEASE do this :( ...

1. the one at the top says "Pick Me!" 2.and the two at the bottom say, "Gimmy" and "Must work on" Little notes to myself

Von- Eli had left the room, leaving him alone. Von sighed, and walked to the window. Looking outside he watched the cloads and birds in the sky. He felt comfortable ...

no, I am practicing poses for my new comic ^_^ Doki doki Moon ^_^ どきどきつき

Wow! That's really good! You're really neat, but I do agree a little with the eye comment. They're kind of- empty. When I draw manga eyes I usually give them ...

(Meet Eli and Von in a room in the castle ^_^ You can scare them... Sort of lol)

How did I do?

Von- He nodded, while looking around. "Um, Eli why did you call me?" *SOrry all I got, class takes up a lot of time :D )

(OOPS! I knew I had forgotten something ^_^) VOn- He nodded, and answered quickly. "Yes." Eli jumped up and down in joy. "What is it?" Von rubbed the back of ...

who was the one who was singing to attract the ones on the list? I think it was Elianna

VOn- He froze. Someone was calling for him. It was the most beautiful thing he had ever heard. So without thinking, Von followed the voice. It lead him to the ...

hmm.... I wonder what I can do then.... *heavy thinking*

Von- A small blond boy walked down the street towards the market. He was off to buy some bread. It was a normal thing he did once a week; however ...