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Re: The Way They Were
teaser...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: The Way They Were
I love TMNT! Especially LEO >_< YOu should check out... http://www.obscurezodic.com. Its a really great fan manga of TMNT its by Tigerfog who is an amazing artist! You'll love it ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Herasy and Treason
COOL! I really enjoyed reading this. It liked ended in a second (Really like 10 minutes- since I reread it 3 times). I like how you described her feelings towards ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Looking Through the Eyes of a Century (Title)
this was nicely written; however I would suggest that you would post the entire part, instead of just the old man remembering part. (I think this isn't the whole thing, ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Ch.1 of Outlawed
This was interesting.... however I think you should of just waited till the entire chapter was finished before posting. Kristina found a place behind an old ugly lime green dresser ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: The Adventure and Woes of Gregory Smit
AMAZING^_^ I really like the way you narrated. It had so much personality, i was interested hugely just because of that! I have a question thought... Do you need all ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: The Adventure and Woes of Gregory Smit - 2
You've done it again. Another amazing piece of writing. ^_^ I can't even give a long review >_< Violet went to follow him, but turned and grabbed the gun that ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Carved Bone - Chapter 1 part 1 - Edited
I must say that was a really nice beginning. It drew me in. I just didn't have a chance of resistance, but I will continue onward. Now that I am ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: I NEED FOOD >_<
doesn't anyone want some reviews?
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
(Tell me who doesn't have a place and I'll give ya one ^_^) Von- He gasped. It was the girl who had broght him here in the first place! The ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: The Vampires Kiss (New Part 3)
NICE! THis reminds me of Twilight, but really different. The characters are different, and everything; however they are going through the vampire/human love thing, but I don't want you to ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: THEM
nice ^_^ A corpse hung from a rotting oak tree, swinging back and forth like a pendulum. The head looked like a red football, which was crying. Blood trickled down ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Going Back
well this is very interesting. I like it that you described the characters in the prologue. SAves a lot of time. Don't worry I write short prologues too. :D I ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Owl Wings
(Its all good ^_^) Von- He sighed. "This sucks." Not only was he in a cage, he was sazed by a girl, and now was AFRAID of one! He went ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Would a character smoking in a novel bother you?
no. It might add to the character's personality. Like she could be a person who is self destructive, and sad. OR a regular bad girl ^_^
Nov 7, 2008