Maki-Chan

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

Chapter 3 “Beth. Beth!” Sera shouted. I opened my eyes to see Sera over me. “Are you okay?” she asked. I didn't answer. I only lifted my head and looked ...

I like to write a scene in different ways, and pick which one sounds the best. ^_^ oh, well now that I think about it. I guess I don't have ...

Nice word use ^_^ It rhymes... o_O I like this ^_^ Reminds me a little bit of how my brother is. Weird. But anyways I liked this good job!

well I liked this ^_^ There was something about it that made me so interested in this. Good writing style ^_^

The walls were pure white, making me feel like I was in another world. There was no ground, no sky, and no end. It must have been hours while I ...

Thanks and I'll edited this ^_^ Now to answer some questions! YOu are correct the reason for Beth hating Sera will be explained, but I am going to post chapter ...