Maki-Chan

Silent Hill: the orphanage Knowledge of the game not require! Information about the town/orphanage : In West Virginia there is a small town called Silent Hill. Silent Hill is a ...

On your writing: you use the word 'however' far too much. Try and eliminate having to use it so much. The descriptions are generally bland and I think you could ...

Quote: I made a step and then quickly dropped onto the ground. “Beth! What is it?” Sera asked. I grunted in pain. “Ow… I’m not sure.” She lifted up my ...

Thanks! I am glad you liked this ^_^ I will try my best to make this more original (For a fanfict) and describe things more. Thanks for reviewing this :D

Can we post Fanfiction. If its a novel?

you could add stuff like "How could ya do this ta me!" or you could do this. "I-I..." I stopped, to think for a moment. "I just wanted to protect ...

I once wrote about a perfect character. He was handsome, smart and brave. He saved a girl and was the dream man for her; however! it turns out he just ...

I say have FUN! Describe them with interesting words like stringy, bobbling, greasy, sickly. Use different and creative words. Here's an example!!! The girl walked past everyone, her long, greasy ...

create many little questions. Like in a novel of mine here are some... 1. How did Alex (Main character's sister) disappear? Why? 2. How did Alex's note get in Beth's ...

My favorite thing about characters is not being perfect. I hate characters whom seem like everything is perfect and nothing bad can ever happen to them. I would rather read ...

Ok, I wanna read/review anyone's horror stories. If its scary bring it! Vampires, were-wolves, zombies, mass murderers, anything that will inflict fear and PAIN! So...bring on the disturbing, jaw drop

NICE! I really liked that. It made me scared, then again I am in my dark room all alone :shock: I have re-written this thing using all of everyone's advice ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though it's a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know ...