Maki-Chan

thanks. it was my 1st lymeric. not bad huh? :D

you see when I was typing this chapter I had to get off when I just started, power out and no internet and also my sister took the computer away ...

you see later on in the story it becomes all clear, what he is, why he is there, and how he got there.

Chapter 4 Runaway Raven had a bad limp when they ran, that was the only reason why Ruki could catch up with him and run with him easily. Ruki looked ...

you see my teach told us to use aabba form and well I tried. I got a 17/20 for a grade. Not to bad.

thanks. I will improve this later. Hopefully soon. Thank you for the truth! :D

you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short. ^_^ :D

nice! :twisted:

ummm... you should post a new topic for every new chapter. Like I was told before if its too long it tends to disscourage readers. People are lazy! don't worry ...

well this is interesting. I never read a poem like this before. I like it. I enjoyed it very much, continue your work. :D

hmmm.... I liked it its word art. but I can't tell you how many human evil poems I rea today. but they are true humans can be so evil. Maybe ...

I thought it was pretty good, not one of your best but... I did enjoy it. maybe if you want to you can write about something that has never been ...

well what can I say. You're a lot better at poetry than I am. I like this one. How you say the crickets chirping are annoying and stuff. I enjoyed ...

oh...this is great! I like it. It a way I'm like John Smith being open and stuff. Nt very religious, and I can handle the truth very easlily. I hope ...

The Forgotten One By Maki-Chan Fear is for those with something to lose. This is my story and no one can take it cause well I own it. ^-^ Chapter ...