Maki-Chan

ohh I hope she makes it! About the poem I thought the word use was great, and it was to my taste at a perfect size. Nice one. :D

neat, I never realieved leaves could be put so beautifully in a peom, well done ^_^ :D

It is interesting and has great word use, but.... What the heck is it about?? :?: :?: I'm confused?

Understanding Why can’t you stay, and play with me on the swings Being there when I am hurt and bleeding Saying good morning to me when I wake Spending time ...

:D I like this peom, its an interesting way to approch this subject. It was enjoyable, keep up the good work! ^_^ :( -uhhh, sigh, I have a fever and ...

thank you very much for your lovel and encouraging comment.*Bows in respect* I hope I made th Duchess a very evil person, someone you would not want to anger. :D ...

Chapter 5 Duchess The two lone figures snuck past the many brick buildings and empty streets. Carefully they would past from alleyway to alleyway. Not making any noises the man ...

...........................................umm.............ok......I'll try to rewrite it.... :D

wow......WOW :o Oh my god this is great!!! It shows so much feeling and it flows so wonderful. It makes me feel sad which is a powerful feet cause I ...

Well, I say that you are at a good start. I do know a little bit about pioneers, cause I live in Wyoming and it is a part of the ...

thank you. I took very much enjoymet in writing this chapter about Brock's nightmare. many questions. Is this a memory, is it a profacy or just a scary dream. hmmm, ...

sorry everyone for the delay. Yesterday when I was writing this something wen twrong and only a small portion got down. I am currently going to redo this, I am ...

thanks! it shall be corrected! :D

Invader Liz by:Maki-Chan Chapter1 Invader Zil "Captain's log day 6, erm...Ummm, I think. No maybe its day 8." I spoke into the recorder."Darn you stupid broken calender..." I moaned looking ...

Chapter 4 Dream "Mommy, I don't wanna go back there, back to the dark place again." A little 5 year old boy stood close to his mother, clenching her brightly ...