Maki-Chan

.........wow.... it is really long and I am scaried to read it... maybe you should star out shorter.^_^

thanks :D

sigh.... :( I am going to delete this one. BUT! I SHALL NOT GIVE UP!!!

alright I shall get rid of the repeaters. :smt023 I shall not give up!!!

sigh..... I shall improve the poem to your exspectations. Man I wish school wasn't tomarro..... :smt024

:smt055 wow..... I loved it. There's something about it that I need to have more of. This is something I would exspect to read out of a book. MORE MORE!!! ...

ummmm, you should space it out alittle more cause it is hard for me to read! >_< I'll be back when its done :thud: please forgive me if I insulted ...

Purpose We all share equal rights on the earth Living under the sun Breathing the air of the sky Given life to decide for our selves Everyone each having moments ...

I made some improvements and I hope that they helped with the poem. :D

you see the one who loved the angel relized at the end that the reasoned he loved her(the angel) was because he wanted her wings.

sigh.... I guess I still need a lot more improvement. I am going to rewrite this peom and make it's flow better. :) I shall do better

Angel wings A love so pure Being there for each other Relying on your wings to take me into the clouds Creating words, an act to tame you Disguising my ...

thank you all for the comments. I am very happy to have written a poem that you all like. For a momment I thought I had lost my peom creating ...

why thank you. :D It was the way I felt about a person from my life. my mom. but because of my big brother I understand more and well I ...

at last a comment about this poem. Comments are needed to tell the writer whether the peom is good or not ^_^, so thank you. I shall improve the peom! ...