Maki-Chan

Well I have to say, this was pretty cool. I liked the part with the slanting words they sounded awsome. I am not very good at reviewing poetry since I ...

thanks! I had trouble with gimp v_V I was trying to make the sky look dark but fiery, but I failed. I will work hard and use your suggestions to ...

thanks! I am glad cause I didn't really like what I did with the crowd so thanks for the helpful suggestion ^_^

ok, I need some constructive suggestions on this page!

Janet- She sensed them. In fact she had anticipated their arrival. The hunters were coming, and just like in her dream one was in the form of a wolf. The ...

hey ridersofdamar can my character Janet claim James?

name- Janet Daniels (JD) age- 16 gender- female appearance- personality- Janet she is somewhat reserved. She is really kind, and gentle. She tries to help those around her even though ...

*BWAHAHAH! EVIL LITTLE GIRL!* Tiff- Lisa was picking on Emma, so Tiff picked up her ball and threw it at Lisa. It smacked her hard in the face. Lisa didn't ...

Tiff- Another girl found her. She smiled at her. "Hello. I'm Tiff." THe other girl giggled. "I'm Emma." She got onto the bed. As they chatted another nurse entered the ...

Lizzy- She felt woozy and nauseous. Someone was carrying her, but she didn't know who. She was placed on a part of a circle. In the middle was a table. ...

Tiff- A small snow white girl sat in a hospital bed. Her hair was like a fiery wave of insanity, and her piercing blue eyes felt like a gun was ...

No Face- He picked up May bride style. It was taking her to the main surgery room. Where the Halo of the Sun waited. Where the sacrifice would be made. ...

No Face- It appeared in the room with May. Pyramid Head sensed him, and left her. Unfortunately damage was already made. It released her. May was still asleep. It snickered. ...

Lizzy- She was laying on the bed, half asleep. Pippa was laying besides her. Pippa was warm. Lizzy remembered having sleep overs before her parents left her. Kylar was wide ...

Lizzy- Kylar and Pippa had appeared into the room. Pippa attacked the nurse with a scalpel. It twitched, trying to cut her with a razor blade; however she easily slit ...