Maki-Chan

*LOst. What is happening so far?*

WOw, old english. I hardly see it anymore. But I do enjoy seeing it because when I do, usually it is writtten quite beaurifully- yours is no exseption, but to ...

I think it was a little bit rushed, but that's just me. I like the theme and the use of words. ^_^

I Like it. I never heard of the song but now I want to. SOoooo... I am going to search of YouTube- wish me luck ^_^>

Nice... It's interesting and different. Good use of words. ^_^

hmmm... Interesting. A litttle creepy but nice. DIffferent point of view and it does make sense. Well DOne ^_^

Its a sad poem, and a rather good one. I liked it, but maybe you should space it apart? :D

Chapter 3 Calling “ Now, now Momo you should know better than trying to go outside.” an older woman explained to eight year old Momo. The little girl dressed in ...

I'll fix the stuff, and well I'm stikin to the jutsu thing. When you are losing lots of blood sometimes you drift into minuets when you forget you are bleeding ...

*eek.. can you space it out alitte bit more. Hard for me to read. I should get glasses I know- sigh......*

It gave me a good feeling. Made me feel happy- yet sad( hmmm?). I liked it. 'Send shivers up my spine' I've seen this way too many times- maybe you ...

*This is based of a funny thing from X-Play. Go to Youtube and look it up ^_^* *This is a test and if you guys like it I'll make more* ...

*Delete please its dead.*

*Stella right now Jenna is lying on the ground bleeding and injured. Her arm had just been nibbled on by Monanoke. Who loves the way she tastes but left to ...

*I'll nock it down a notch. BAM! alright its all done ^_^*