Maki-Chan

Hello I am the critic. I shall review your stuff if you leave what it is called. I will give you an honest revew and so on. I will not ...

*School is over and Aoi and Viola are heading towards Aoi's home.*

Aoi- School was finally over. Aoi waited by her locker for Viola to arrive. "Hey. Ready to go?" Aoi asked her. Viola nodded." Yah I'm ready to get outta here." ...

Aoi- It was nice for Aoi- she had made a friend. Viola was really cool. Aoi bent towards Viola." Hey do you want to come over my house to night ...

Aoi- Fly and Giovanna came over to sit with Aoi and Viola. "Hello." Aoi greeted them. *Sorry All I got.*

alright thanks. ^_^

Aoi- Physics past quickly. When it was over Aoi and Viola headed towards the cafiteria to either have meatloaf or salad. "Hmm... I want to have salad please." Aoi told ...

oh ok. Who is that character is it Tex or Viola

Maki- She was following behind the rest- with a filled backpack of supplies.

What is the main perpose for the emotion controlers to be on earth?

Tera- She sighed." Maybe I shouldn't get into fights anymore." SHe was in the office again. THis time it was just a warning.

*he was in math class with Naomi and Aoi but that class is over I'm not sure where Naomi is but Aoi is in physics with Viola.*

*It depends it can either have 4 long classes each different per day or 8 classes a day all of them.*

Umm do you know about Naruto? Cause I have a fan-fiction about it. Its called Wind Demon. Please look at it. Tell me what you think of it.

Aoi- She sat down in the desk besides Viola. The teacher Mr. Jones past out the books for the class. Aoi looked through it to check how damaged it was. ...