Maki-Chan

Aoi- Enrty walked towards Naomi. He didn't even notice Giovanna coming in. Aoi ran in front of Naomi. "I won't let you hurt her." Aoi yelled. Entry laughed. Naomi grabbed ...

I'm sadness/depsression. That makes sense. Aoi really hates Theo.

*Umm Kittykat Aoi is in Naomi's room.She had just tackled Entry.*

does Entry create illusions of poeple's worst fears?

Aoi- She ran into Naomi's room. Entry was laughing as Sirith was bleeding. Naomi was still crying. Aoi ran into Entry. She wanted to protect her 'family'. "Get the hell ...

Aoi-under Entry's spell( Basterd) Thoe smiled and then he struck Aoi. He continued to hurt her- filling her with more sadness and depressiom. "You think that you can just keep ...

Sora- The old witch's yell awoken Sora and the others. SOra shifted in her bed. She didn't want to wake up, but luckily for her Lilith had the bed next ...

Aoi- She was now all Alone- with Theo. The man who had caused her so much pain and torment. Aoi looked away from him, but Theo looked right at her. ...

^_^ I know! I thought I was the only X-Play viewer. I'm not alone YAH! I'll fix this up, and add commas. Hopefully you'll like chapter 2- locked doors.

thanks. I try my best with this. ^_^

when is theo's son going to arrive and cause trouble?

Aoi- They had been shopping for an hour- then is was 4:10pm. Aoi had to get home soon to greet Viola. "That was fun Aoi." Giovanna said. They both headed ...

Aoi- "Um, what are you doind on the ground?"Giovanna asked. Aoi stood up." Oh, I saw a spider on the ground and I was going to grab it and set ...

Alright. I just made a Naruto fan-fiction and I am having a little trouble with it. This is not only for naruto fans but also regular writers. anyone may help. ...

*Sorry about the locker thing- just ignore it ^_^ And that was wierd about the review thing- too random* Aoi- Leaving her locker Aoi decied to walk home. Enjoying the ...