Maki-Chan

The Maketu horizon is a ruby crease. The tide creeps to our feet and the gulls are beginning to call high above the beachside fish shop. Dad’s eyes slide away ...

My opinion… This was written beautifully and I liked how you described things. I think though that the first three pages you ramble on about the images and it was ...

This is really cool. 1. I really like your style. It's realistic-ish but not really. It is interesting. 2. I really like how they look, peaceful and relaxed. It is ...

This is pretty good. There are only a few things to suggest ^_^ 1. When outlining make sure the lines are not so thick (gives a sort of messy look) ...

thanks ^_^ Yeah... I mess up a lot when I make lineart from my drawings. It's hard for me. I will fix it up, and thanks for the help XD

thanks ^_^ Yeah, I noticed the stripes right after I posted this (bad luck v_v). Oh and I also noticed that I made her have six fingers on her right ...

wow. I have to say you are very pretty. ok. I really like the last three photos. The 1/3 is nice it looks peaceful and you look the best in ...

Renee Jones- The desert burned her skin as they walked through the desert. "Ow...I'm getting a sunburn." Renee complained. Von moved besides her blocking the sun's rays. "Thanks." As they ...

Nice pictures ^_^

wow. This is really looks like a fantasy world. Are you a video game graphics designer? Cause this reminds me of a video game scenery. Nice by the way. I ...

GASP!!!!!!!! Your realism is AMAZING! I love this. The hair looks so real and I can see all of the emotion in her face. The hands are nicely done (usually ...

awww. They are all so cute ^_^ My favorite one is the one painting. Nice job :D

and the colored version...

here's the lineart

Renee Jones- The sky seemed to have a red-ish tint to it. That day was the July parade, and everyone in the small desert town in Arizona was attending it. ...