Maki-Chan

Haimon- He was strange. Being born of both life and death. He could recreate souls and bring them back to life, but he prefered not too. The souls needed rest ...

Shiro- Walking through the empty plains by the town of Bilgar, Shiro was heading towards the capital of Estacia. His perpose was simple-revenge. On the stupid fake dragon king, Celixon. ...

wow.....long.....very long......scary.... maybe you should split this into 2 parts? So its smaller and not so scary?

separate please- hard to read. It'll also help attract more pleople to read and review it. ^_^

Well for one thing can you space it out a bit- please? its hard for me to read. Anyways I thought it was interesting. Your metaphores are awsome! Though you ...

Well I personally think fire is somehting we will never fully understand. But some of your ideas about it was pretty deep, and I'd saw a lot closer than what ...

Plot: After an unscheduled landing for a space shuttle, a horrible virus spreads. It infects people easily, with either an injection, a cut, a kiss, and more. When you are ...

Well I like this better then the other one- going home. ^_^

its alright, I guess. It doesn't flow too well.

If you do what the others suggest I think this will be a perfect peom. I like the subject, its interesting. ^_^

I think its pretty awsome. I never really read peoms like this. Its a firsty, and I enjoyed it. ^_^ enjoy the face! _____________ ________________ U U X ______________________ _

Hmm, interesting title. Not too bad, but this part. And the darkness will have won. just doesn't really go well with it. maybe its the word 'won'. I don't know. ...

Hitsugaya- A person screamed." ORKS!!!" "crap..." Hitsugaya whispered as the monsters started to run into town.

Tobi Uzaki- Maybe he could scare her away, if he gave her the evil eye. Tobi just stared at her. " Tobi, h-how are you?" Amber asked. There was a ...

Tobi Uzaki- His eyes widened. "Amber." He growled. Most things connetcing him with his past he hated. And Amber is no exseption.