Maki-Chan

Soul's Wrath Chapter 1 Fading away It's been two years since my brother, Kohaku, died. Or shall I say when I killed him. Ever since that fateful day, ever other ...

Ume Udaro- His zampacto power was curious. But Aoi and Akane's power were stronger. Ume flash stepped behind Kaku and struck him with Aoi's hilt. He fell to the ground. ...

*HUH!? Timmy did you read my post- you released Kannon.*

Ume Udaro- Kaku pulled his sword. Ume did the same. Using her spiritual force her sword split in two. " Aoi- shed from the light, Akane- arise from the darkness!" ...

Shiro-- hE got a room in an inn at Sendai.

Ume Udaro- TIMMY I'lln go first so wait for my post!!!

I guess I'll be the dude. name: Kai Uduro gender:male age:17 personality:he is fun and happy. not an emo though. Outgoing. history: mother- Gina Udaro sister- Sakura Udaro appearance:

I thought it wasn't too bad, just space it out a bit please.

Ume Udaro- Kaku insalted Hitsugaya now she was pissed. "My captain, allow me to disaplin this arrogant bastard." Ume proposed. Histugaya smiled. "Sounds finse with me. I'll get permission to ...

Ume Udaro- Hitsugaya was pissed. "Don't disrespect your supiriors, Idiot." Ume sighed. "captain I have my reports for today."

Ume Udaro- she sighed. Kaku and Gatame were arguing. "Gatame, we should turn in our reports before the CAptain gets angry."

not bad- loved the message. Its a little bit rough witht he flow though.

ummm..... maybe it can be a horror thing or a love story? ACtion?

ok.....? I- well its ok.

Ume Udaro- Gatame sighed. "Why can't you relax Kaku?" Kaku looked away. "We are heading to see Captain Hitsugaya. We have to give him our day's reports now." ume explained.