Maki-Chan

kinda short chapter. I am on page 20! YAY! ^_^ Chapter 4 Fights and disappearing The next day, Allie was walking towards the cafeteria for breakfast when she heard someone ...

Thanks I will fix those up. Btw about the crazy thing. When the police found them they told them about the monsters and such. So the poeple think they are ...

thanks ^_^ Chapter 4 is called "Fights and disappearing"

Chapter 3 Chase scene and more Nightmares An unknown person wearing a mining suit was standing right in front of the bushes. The four girls remained silent. Lizzy covered her ...

Good point. I will most defenlty do that. ^_^

can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it). It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. ...

can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it). It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. ...

can you read my story? I am only getting one person to review it (the reviewer loves it). It is fanfiction, but you don't have to know anything about it. ...

I knew you would love it ^_^ I wanted my silent hill fanfiction to be actually plausible (Sorta) and that I want the readers to see how close the 4 ...

lovely poem, but needs a little bit more. Like something explaining about how the two that love each other are different, and are forced apart? A great start, I can ...

*What if My friends and I attended a boarding school in Silent Hill? The main characters are based off of real people.* Chapter 2 Bad dreams and a ghost hunt ...

depends. Some poeple work a lot better under stress and knowing they can always work on something else and not the same thing over and over again. However it can ...

good tips very helpful. ^_^

October's Scars or Burns sounds really cool ^_^

nice tips. Good way to improve yourself ^_^