Maki-Chan

Shiro- The draogn's fire fushed towards them. But then a huge shield of ice, saved them. But it was Shiro's wings. Shin gasped. An angel.

*Serenity is going to be gone for awhile and she wants to characters to be used. So I offered and she said ok.*

Ume Udaro- " You don't really have a choice, and for your freind." He stopped a smile appeared on his face. "You'll see her soon." Gatame backed away from him, ...

its the opposite for me. First person view workds for me ^_^

Ume Udaro- "Release the other one back to the Soul Society. Then Ume can return after the transformation. "The man ordered an assistant. The assistant nodded. Then he rushed to ...

Jared- He looked in Tobi's room, Abmer was sleeping in Tobi's bed. Jared giggled. but then he relized that TObi was sleeping on the couch, and with Amber.

*oohh, oops >_< Yeah she is in the Emerald kingdom with you. You're in the same castle with Ume but in the prison. Will Ume is in the labs.*

Shiro- the dragon cried out in pain. Cursing Shin under his breath. Shiro stumbled towards Shin- who was trembling. "Come one we need to get out of here." Shiro told ...

I think I'll do first person view for my story.

Tom- the house shook, like jello. Waking Tom up. "Holy cra." He was interupted by the sound of the roof falling over him.

*No The emerald Kingdom is another world. Soul Society, earth and The Emerald Kingdom- get it?*

Shiro- Shin was frozen in fear. "Idiot!" Shiro muttered. Then he dashed to Shin and pushed her out of the way, and the dragon's hand grabbed around Shiro, bringing him ...

Ume Udaro- "Your power is quiet amazing. Now that the key is removed I'll use you to perform my will." He said. The a blinding light came over Ume. And ...

Shiro- Drawing his sword Shiro ran towards the monsterous dragon. Shin gasped. "W-what are you doing?!" Shiro didn't answer, all that mattered was saving those in need. the dragon roared ...

wow, this is AWSOME!!!!!! ^_^ I really enjoyed reading it. Now i exspect great things from you. :D