Maki-Chan

Advice! 1. you should put this into parts 2. space out the paragraphs so its easier to read This will help attract more readers. Cause right now its so long ...

Ume Udaro- She appeared once again in the soul society. But this time she was not a soul reaper but rahter a arrcar. Ume was longer no more. She was ...

Shiro- Spreding his wings (angel wings- not icy dragon wings) Shiro headed towads the fort.

Haimon- He shrugged. "You know that you can't really leave- you're dead its against the rul." He was interupted. Naomi pressed her lips against his- kissing Haimon. He blushed. "I-i ...

well this was alright, but I think its kind of a weak begining perhaps you can ignore most of the begining part of this, and focus more on his proposal ...

ok. With part 2 I feel more connected With Vienna. She strangly somewhat reminds mme of myself- wierd huh? I like part 2 of chapter 1 better. I'll read chapter ...

Ume Udaro- "Are you ready?" He asked. Ume nodded. A hollow mask had formed on her head, but it shattered only leaving the top part with the horns. The mask ...

Rene- She felt so stupid. "Why did I have to that? Now he probably thinks I'm a freak." After leaving- thanks to Shiro who paid the bill, Rene decided to ...

Ume Udaro- Gatame was back in the soul society. Hitsugaya spotted her. "Gatame! Where is Udaro and Kaku?" He asked. Gatame looked at him. "I don't know where Kaku is, ...

Shiro- Shin's words hurt, him very much. Memories of death filled his head- death he caused. Shiro laughed. Shin was confused. "What's so funny?" "Come on we should get an ...

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Shiro- He looked at her. "Its ok." Just then the dragon shattered into a million pecies. After that his wings turned into snow. Shin looked around. The snow was everywhere. ...

Amber you can use my plot ^_^ Name: Maki Haruno Age:(age does not matter!) 15 Gender: female Race: human Height: 5' 4" Weight: 108lbs Eye Color: green Hair Color: purple ...

Tobi Uzaki- He protected Jess from the shattering glass. 3 male were-cats entered the house. "Get out." Tobi growled at them. One of them hissed. "YOu can't just brake into ...

Shiro- When the wings pulled back to Shiro- the dragon was frozen solid. Shin was speechless, touching his could icy wings.