Maki-Chan

Shiro- He awoke in a bed- at Grace and Sam's house. Shiro rubbed his head. "Where am I?" He whispered. "Good you're awake," Grace said. Shiro looked over to see ...

Tobi Uzaki- Jessica tried to walk past Tobi, but he grabbed her arm. "I'm not letting you leave." Tobi told her. More were-cats entered the house. Tobi had to think ...

Haimon- NAomi was close to Haimon's side. As they both stared at Tex. "Its possible that you know each other. Naomi did have another life, but she died, and I ...

well written, the words are so lovely put togther, but its way too short!

Hurray!!! ^_^ I'm glad you're are done with this chapter- I will be working on chapter 3. Hope you like it.

Hurray. I liked this part too ^_^ Using my own flesh as a shield, giving up all my hopes and dreams. I'll fix her up. And chapter 1 is on ...

Tobi Uzaki- He growled. "You bastards. I'll kill you." Tobi didn't even need to ask who they had, Maria was missing all day. Jared pulled out his pistol, and Amber ...

*Question! Where is Shiro?!*

Ume Udaro- Ume stared at Soifon, her arms still a sleek metal color. Ume was still in bankai mode. Soifon drew her sword. " i am sorry for this Ume." ...

Haimon- He had taken Naomi to a wonderful valley in Japan- on earth. THere was a clear blue lake, and the ladscape was covered in wild flowers. The sky was ...

sigh.... Oh kristi- she doesn't know we are even commenting. I'll send her and email.

Ume Udaro- Kaku backed away from Ume, as Gatame walked next to him. "Ume! What happened to you?!" Gatame questioned. Ume stared at them, her eyes lifeless and glowing red. ...

thanks! ^_^ I'm working on chapter 1. Its getting easier now, so the wait won't be much longer.

*After this I'm going to bed* Ume- She looked at Kaku- her eyes empty and lifeless. *gotta go*

Ume Udaro- Shne held her twin swords in her hands. They began to melt into liquid metal, then they were absorbed into Ume's arms. One soul reaper ran toward her- ...