Maki-Chan

awwww.....disappionted. Its wierd your shortest poem gets the most comments. Oh well I love your other work too, and will continue to read it. ^_^

though short- it packs a punch. ^_^ 9/10

GASP!!!! T-This is just wonderful. I read some of your other poetry- but not for a while. Now I'm heading to your profolio and checking out. ^_^ Part of me ...

well this is surtainly interesting. But can you space it out a bit please- hard for me to read. I give it a 7/10 ^_^

Its ok, but if you think it is trash than why post it?

Haimon- As he changed for the new day, Naomi waited patiently for him to finish. Then he exited his room- a clean white shirt on and jeans. Naomi stared at ...

Claps- :D I rather like this. Can't wait to read more. Now for corrections “Not a go what is it suppost to mean? Lars sighed and walked out of the ...

Note: This is mostly for Me and KillTheZombie but others can join too ^_^ Plot: Zombies attack the place where the largest mall is (Its in Canada...I think), you make ...

^_^ I like this. When you post more, I'll defenatley check them out ^_^

Maki- Her goal was in sight. Maki ran towards the carige where he was. But as she opened it, no one was in side. "There you are. Are master told ...

Ume Udaro- As ichigo approached her, a new scent came. The other half. It was near by, and with a flash step Ume vanished.

*sorry about all the posts- don't know what happened* Tobi Uzaki- Mizuki. His anger was getting the better of him."Fine, if you won't take me back, I'll make sure you ...

Shiro- The guards, he didn't want to hurt anyone. But they were really pissing him off. As his sword met with one of thiers. Another guard had a little girl ...

this one is an old one. My 1st poem posted here.

The time period is more medieval, right? No technology, guns, etcetera? And will we start out in the cages, or will we be able to post our own captures? 1. ...