MakeMusicNotWar

I'm a sucker for love poems. This was pretty good. I especially enjoyed the ending, where you included some imagery; that part was lovely. I can't decide if the first ...

She dances in the silence of the night. She’s full of beauty and she’s full of grace. She’ll keep dancing until she sees daylight. The moon’s resting low as the ...

Okay, I put it into stanzas, which was how the poem was to begin with but somehow got screwed up, but I don't feel the need to change any of ...

You're always on my mind I dream of our bodies entwining But since you seem so far away I gaze out the window sighing Loneliness swirls all around me Like ...

I really love this poem and I don't think it's cliche at all. Your use of imagery was incredible as was your word choice. The ending was perfect and it ...

I was interested in the poem because of the title, and I found the entire poem to be beautiful. I adored your word choice and subtle imagery. The poem flowed ...