Maisie

Thank you for your constructive criticism!

I was out in the hallway, pacing up and down and trying to calm myself down. Breathe. Don’t cry, don’t cry. That’s precisely what she wants you to do. I ...

Thank you once again for all your constructive criticism! :)

To PreacherGirl18, I will be adding the third chapter today and keep going with the rest of the chapters for the forseeable future. Don't worry, there are like 28 chapters ...

Hi, don't I know you from somewhere? ;)

I really enjoyed this! It is interesting to see her point of view on the whole love situations and fairytales and all of that stuff. First of all though, I ...

High School High School. If I was to explain it, I think it would be best described as a hierarchy of sorts. You see, you have all your typical cliques. ...

I'm here to do a review well - of a sort anyway. I don't quite understand the character of Jake - I don't know whether it's just me or...? He ...

“I know. I’m sorry you hate it here so much.” She looked away. She knew how much I hated this dumb town. “It’s not you’re fault, Mom. And hey, that’s ...

Thank you for all your constructive criticism, I shall be working through my second chapter soon, and then go back and edit the chapters.

Hi Taylor! I'm Maisie, welcome to YWS!

August 3rd, 2006. The summer had finally decided to arrive in Farrowbrook, since most of June and July had consisted of rain and clouds and now that it was around ...

Thanks very much for the feedback! :D

Sorry, posted this in the wrong section. Transferring it over to the correct one!

Hi! So, my overall opinion is that I thought this poem was really moving and makes you think about faith and Jesus. Although I loved this poem there were some ...