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Ramwick was too be married Ramwick was to be married. Only one 'o'. I think you should try to include just a tiny bit more description but other than that ...

I don't think English is dying, I just think more and more people are getting lazy and ignorant. I agree with Claudette. Latin is dead; English is not. We are ...

Thanks for your crtiques. I have made the changes you pointed out and I really appreciate the help. As for not much happening it will get a bit more exciting ...

Don't worry. I will include those types of things in the next couple of chapters. It will all become clear. Thanks for the comment. -Jack

I would just like to say that I am writing two stories at the moment. I am writing this one just for the sake of writing. The other one, Prince ...

Chapter One THE SOUNDS OF WAR Prince Akkarn awoke to the familiar sounds of war, the echoes of the enemies cannons audible from the opposite side of the Kingdom. He ...

I am actually writing two stories at the moment so each chapter may take a little while to complete and post on here so please be patient. This is a ...

I like the Historical start to the story. It kind of gets you asking yourself a few questions like "Who are the Purebloods?" and "Who are the raiders?" However, I ...

I did love the saga but I have to admit, it is quite a predictable story line, except the ending. But I won't ruin that if you have only just ...

Gray is spelled like this "gray". Grey is spelt like this in Britain, "Grey" it is only Americans that spell it "Gray" so ShadowTwits spelling is correct because she is ...

I love the Demonata series and The Saga of Darren Shan (Yes, Im British so its not Cirque Du Freak). I read the Saga a couple of years ago and ...

Gray is spelled like this "gray". Grey is spelt like this in Britain, "Grey" it is only Americans that spell it "Gray" so ShadowTwits spelling is correct because she is ...

Chapter One SEVEN HOURS LATER Ani Ward left her house at 13 Appleton Street at her usual time of eight thirty and walked cautiously to her car, trying not to ...

I imagine ice and frost are white, why black? Is it because of mud and salt, or people treading over it? Black ice is ice that you can't see. It ...

More coming soon . . . -Jack