Magyk

It was supposed to make people feel all mushy inside. I know it could have been laid out better but that is the second poem I have ever written so ...

For Sophie Every time I look at you My heart skips a beat. The emotions I feel when I look into your chocolate Brown eyes confuse me Beyond belief. The ...

It ridiculous. If it was taken into that zoo a few months after it was abandoned by its mother there would be no complaints. It's way too cute to kill. ...

I’m no Superman And I don’t have wings. Neither does Superman. Try balancing your ryhmes out more, and remember that the words themselves always, repeat always, take precedence over ryhming. ...

I really liked it. Especially this bit my tears blurred my vision so much that I'm still blind. and Do you have any clue what you do to me? I ...

I like it. "Lois Lane" and "Mary Jane" lines I particularly liked. But I can give you my heart, My attention and my soul. I can listen to your words ...

First poem I have ever written (outside of my English class) For Sophie ****** If I was Superman I’d want you as my Lois Lane. If I was Spiderman I’d ...

I only drink water (and maybe the occasional cup of tea) but mainly water. I love H2O, it is magical stuff. Whats Pat buchanan (or what ever it was)? Is ...

"Music. I love the melodies my servants hum when they are cleaning. I can just imagine them as angels, playing a harp." ~ Prince Akkarn. How many people have you ...

"Music. I love the melodies my servants hum when they are cleaning. I can just imagine them as angels, playing a harp." ~ Prince Akkarn. How many people have you ...

If cat eyes started rolling down my face, I'd freak out big time. I believe when he says, "Piercing yellow eyes, like a cat's, rolled across the elf's face calmly, ...

I am sorry that it felt like a chore to read but Chapter three should be better. There are ALWAYS chapters in books that feel like a chore to read. ...

Chapter Two SUNKEN CITY Prince Akkarn had the light held out in front of him as he marched down the slopping tunnel that led in to Kreppin. Rentor was still ...

This is good. I like the potion type thing in the vial. It's a good idea. I am really looking forward to more and can't spot any mistakes. Before anyone ...

Right. I am nearly finished on Chapter Two and it should be added by tonight, maybe tomorrow if I run out of time. I have also added a few extra ...