Magyk

I love the layout of this poem. It's really interesting. I also like the ryhming. It's a really nice poem but I won't try to make you change anything because ...

He finally arrived and pulled THE tent fabric back. He saw a few of THE circus master 'S older performers. and because of this, I have to clear up loose ...

She sniveled fresh tears shedding from her eyes. She slipped her shoes off. She pulled one sock off and tested the water with her naked foot. It felt so sensual ...

I think I prefered the first one. It made me . . . laugh isn't the right word to put here, but I don't know what is. The second one ...

Wow. I like it. I can't explain why though. Maybe it's because I can kind of realate to the Poor, lost, little boy. Life sure is confusing.

It's only four lines but speaks my heart so don't slag me off about that. ****** For Sophie I feel trapped between humanity, And the horror of insanity. You turned ...

I know everyone else is asking this but what does the Mage do? I really like the story so far and can't wait to here some more but I think ...

Just like to say that I am British so realised is spelt realised not realized. It's only america that spell it realised. There may also be a few other spelling ...

I hope you mean the sport fencing like your avatar. ****** The thin metal blade came shooting towards me. The man infont of me was dressed all in white except ...

This might just be me, but I love a book with a few great fight scences, believable and likebale characters, death of a character or two (usually if it is ...

It became a bit too busy. 6/10 for Defenestration 3/10 for Bellybutton Shnukkum

5/10 - Makes me think of a train. This post was more popular than I thought it would be. YAY Shnukkum.

6/10 - Slightly peculiar but nothing special. Carrot

7/10 - It makes you tongue feel funny when you say over and over again. Fantasmigorical (It's not a real word but it was said on TV last night, means ...

Everyone has to try and think of a funny word. The next person to post has to rate how funny the word posted before them was. (Rate out of 10) ...