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Re: A Clash of Harmony and War, Book 1 - Prologue, Part 2
Very good, as I said your last one was. If you publish it I would definitely buy it. The only (bad) thing that stuck out was... Raptye was one of ...
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: The Fall of Domina Clepta -Chapter Three
Hello. I didn't have time to read through the whole chapter, but I noticed some things that you might want to change. First off look at this, "Oh fine. But ...
Apr 4, 2013 -
Re: Forgotten chapter 2
Pretty good! The style could use a little improvement though. The grammar isn't great, but you probably haven't edited yet. If you have, sorry! Anyway, examples would be... “Enough to ...
Apr 2, 2013