MagnusBane

Wow, this is great! I don't really see any grammar mistakes, and you seem to have all the nitpicky stuff under control. The only thing that I can really point ...

That was great! I would definetely read on, just to see what Herald's story is. There's not really a lot here for me to review. The other posters seem to ...

I like it! You had a good hook at the beginning, and starting like that sucked me into the story. There was some good dialogue there, as well - as ...

All right, here goes... Imelda wasn't alone. Good beginning. It really got my attention. Imelda listened, wondering if it had been a part of her dreams. Wondering if what had ...

Wow, I like it! You can definetely feel the longing and regret the character is experiencing. I did find some little grammar things, though, that you should probably fix: Everlong ...

Snow white and the seven dwarfs. The unauthorized true story If you’re reading this, “Happy” has probably taken me away for knowing too much.. Okay, this made me laugh! I ...

Hmm, I like it! I would definetely want to read on. You have some good dialogue, but it feels like there's too much emphasis on that. It's almost like you ...