MagnusBane

Metaphor

Sorry this is so long. Quick recap: Main character Cassie Sinclair, accompanied by the family gargoyle, has sneaked out of her parents' house late at night. She ventured into the ...

Paper

Crown

Hey Cspr! Maybe you should hang out in your bathroom more often, if you get cool story ideas like this there. :) You weren't kidding when you said that this ...

Purple!

Hey! This was really interesting. I love the whole concept behind it. There were a few little issues that I noticed, though: The day they had all been training us ...

Wow. I will never look at a Doritos commercial the same again. :) That commercial really is creepy, now that I think about it...

Red

Hey Stella! :) I'm sure you don't really want nitpicks, but I noticed a few little things: But the murders were nasty, inhumane, frightening. This word doesn't seem to fit ...

Hey Stella! I really liked this. People are always writing about characters who can see ghosts/dead people/various frightening things, but you made it seem fresh and not at all like ...

I sat up slowly, panting, and spat out a mouthful of hair. My ears strained to hear in the sudden silence. Now that I wasn’t crashing through the undergrowth, I ...

I've gotten some reviews on this, but no one's torn it apart yet! If you have time to review, it would be wonderful if you ripped this to shreds. :)

Hey Ranger! Another good installment. I like the relationship that's developing between Jot and Chance. It seems very realistic, despite the fact that one of the characters is a dragon. ...

Hey careless! This was certainly very interesting and unique. There was a little house on a quiet street in a quiet town. This isn't the strongest sentence for the beginning ...